El Lobo – Mondays Finish the Story

This is my third week of taking part in the flash fiction writing challenge, Mondays Finish the Story, hosted by Barbara Beacham. The challenge involves writing a story of 100-150 words from the photo and first line prompt kindly provided by the host.

Here is this week’s photo . . .


. . . and this is my story, incuding the first line prompt:

She was unaware that she was being watched as she focused on the mail coach careering down the narrow valley. The rockfall would soon be within their sights and the screeching of wheels and whinnying horses would be her cue to move out. She grinned, anticipating the payrolls soon to be hers.

Townsfolk called her El Lobo. The Wolf. She liked that. It amused her that the fools assumed her to be a man. They knew her as Kitty, the pretty, young schoolteacher, all dimples and smiles. She’d honed her skills well over the years, knew exactly how to stalk her prey, target the weakest amongst them. They deserved no better, after all, for hanging her father. The first El Lobo

She adjusted her mask and spurred her restless stallion into motion. Then the shot rang out and she dropped like a felled beast.

The sheriff smiled. El Lobo had been unaware that she was being watched.

Word Count: 149


19 thoughts on “El Lobo – Mondays Finish the Story

  1. Lovely skew on the expected, Millie! I have to say, I liked this one better than the more literal take…but you know, that’s me. I like posts a little off-center! Nice job!

    1. Thank you, Mara. I haven’t looked at anyone else’s yet, so I don’t know who’s done what. I’m guessing yours won’t be on the literal side! I was late doing mine last night and too tired to start reading.
      Thank you again for the kind comment.

      1. I didn’t end up doing one this week. 😦 I think I’ve got something for the Grammar Ghoul competition though, if I can get it finished this evening…

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