She waited, poised and smiling, filling her lungs to a regular rhythm that would convey an air of confidence to the judgemental audience before her. At the piano, Edward’s fingers hovered over the keys and their daughter, Dottie, had a look of determination on her face as she prepared to turn the pages of music.
Jemima had always loved to sing. Music was in her very soul and as the dulcet tones issued from deep inside, she was transported to a different plane: a place where all that mattered was the meaning of the words she sang. And tonight, it was a love song of such sadness, Jemima’s tears threatened to flow.
At the rear of the room her beloved watched, waiting for the concert to end. He and Jemima had loved each other for years, but the time had never been right to forsake their marriages and growing children. Now they would delay no longer. Beyond the gates a carriage waited to whisk them away, to a place where no one would find them.
Jemima would miss her darling Dottie, and her guilt at causing her pain would stay with her forever. But Dottie knew naught of her Papa’s true nature: a jealous and vindictive bully who had watched Jemima’s every move, chastising her with his fists if she failed to comply to his wishes.
After twenty years of cruel abuse, it was time to leave.
This piece of flash fiction forms the first part of a two-part story. Part 2 – which I’ve since titled The Outcome – was published back in May here. Yes, I know I’ve done this the wrong way round, but I hadn’t written Part 1 then. It was done as an afterthought. (I seem to have a lot of afterthoughts. Lol )
5 thoughts on “The Photograph Part 1: The Prelude”
Bravo Millie. It fits perfectly!
Thank you, Peter. I’m glad you think so.
I admire your way of using words. A good way of connecting to the second part.
Thank you so much for saying so, Ineke. I thought the first story I wrote needed a ‘before’ story to make it more meaningful.
A wonderful prelude to your earlier story, Millie. I wonder whether Dottie will ever realise what her father is actually like, or if she’ll just remain blinded by love and continue to cover for him.